Need a little help with a gloss--posted what i tried to do -- help would be great

[purplewowies]

I promised people on another forum I'd gloss "You Are The Music In Me" from High School Musical 2 for them, and then I realized I don't know much about glossing. Anyway, here's my attempt at a gloss

You Are The Music In Me

Na na na na

Na na na na yeah
YES
You are the music in me
YOU MUSIC IN ME

You know the words Once Upon A Time
YOU KNOW WORDS ONCE-UPON-A-TIME
Make you listen.
FORCE* LISTEN
There's a reason.
REASON

When you dream there's a chance you'll find
WHEN YOU DREAM CHANCE YOU FIND
A little laughter or happy ever after
LAUGH O-R** HAPPY END

Your harmony to the melody
YOUR HARMONY T-O** MELODY
It's echoing inside my head
ECHO IN MY HEAD

A single voice
ONLY-ONE VOICE
Above the noise
ABOVE NOISE

And like a common thread
SAME-AS COMMON STRING
Oooh, you're pullin' me
YOU PULL ME

When I hear my favorite song
WHEN I HEAR MY FAVORITE SONG
I know that we belong
I KNOW WE-TWO NEED TOGETHER
Oh, you are the music in me
YOU MUSIC IN ME

Yeah it's living in all of us
YES LIVE IN ALL PEOPLE
And it's brought us here because
IT BRING US-TWO HERE BECAUSE
Because you are the music in me
YOU MUSIC IN ME

Na na na na oh
Na na na na na
Yeah yeah yeah (Na na na na)
YES YES YES
You are the music in me
YOU MUSIC IN ME

It's like I knew you before we met (Before we met)
SAME-AS I KNEW YOU BEFORE MEET
Can't explain it
CAN'T EXPLAIN
There's no name for it (No name for this)
NO NAME FOR IT

I'm sang you words I never said
I SING YOU WORDS I NEVER SAY
And it was easy (So easy)
EASY
'cause you see the real me (I see)
BECAUSE YOU SEE REAL ME
As I am
ME NOW
You understand
YOU UNDERSTAND
And that's more than I've ever known
MORE I EVER KNOW

To hear your voice (Hear your voice)
HEAR YOUR VOICE
Above the noise (Ohh ohh)
ABOVE NOISE

I know I'm not alone
I KNOW I NOT ALONE
Oh you're singing to me (Ohh yeah)
YOU SING ME

When I hear my favorite song
WHEN I HEAR MY FAVORITE SONG
I know that we belong (Yeah ohh)
I KNOW WE-TWO NEED TOGETHER
You are the music in me
YOU MUSIC IN ME

It's living in all of us
LIVE IN ALL PEOPLE
And it's brought us here because
IT BRING US-TWO HERE BECAUSE
You are the music in me
YOU MUSIC IN ME

Together we're gonna sing (Yeah)
TOGETHER WE-TWO SING
We've got the power to sing what we feel (What we feel)
WE HAVE POWER SING FEELINGS
Connected and real
CONNECTED REAL**

Can't keep it all inside (Ohh)
FEELINGS CAN'T STAY IN

Na na na na (Ohh yeah)
YES
Na na na na na (Ohh yeah)
YES
Yeah yeah yeah (Na na na na)
YES YES YES
You are the music in me (In me)
YOU MUSIC IN ME

Na na na na (Ohh yeah)
YES
Na na na na na (Ohh yeah)
YES
Na na na na
You are the music in me
YOU MUSIC IN ME

When I hear my favorite song (Favorite song)
WHEN I HEAR MY FAVORITE SONG
I know that we belong (We belong)
I KNOW WE-TWO NEED TOGETHER
You are the music in me
YOU MUSIC IN ME

Yeah it's living in all of us
YES LIVE IN ALL PEOPLE
It's brought us here because (Here because)
IT BRING US-TWO HERE BECAUSE
You are the music in me
YOU MUSIC IN ME

Na na na na (Ohh yeah)
YES
Na na na na (Ohh yeah)
YES
Na na na na
You are the music in me (Yeah)
YOU MUSIC IN ME......YEAH

*I wrote "force" because of meaning. If there's a different word I could stick in there, could somebody tell me?

**What would I sign there?

If anyone could help me and tell me if it's an okay gloss, that would be great!

[purplewowies]

I'll find the other signs not in the song gloss (yet) and go with what i have.

I'd wait for a reply, but they're getting annoyed and bored.:o:p:rolleyes:

[aligreat]

Sorry to not be of any help. I am not in the High School Musical phase of life as I have preschoolers.

[purplewowies]

Yeah, but me and a lot of people on the forum I was providing the gloss to are, and they were getting restless, so I tried to fill in the gaps.

I even signed it in a video, even though I stink; the video can be found here: You Are The Music In Me - Signed (http://s202.photobucket.com/player.swf?refURL=/&file=http://vid202.photobucket.com/albums/aa303/purplewowies/YouAreTheMusicInMe-1.flv&fs=1&os=1&ap=1)

I noticed I signed some words wrong in there, I think. :p

[TennisGirl]

GREAT JOB!!! :D:D:D That was awsome! and your brave enough to post it in the forums! :D

[marie]

I even signed it in a video, the video can be found here: You Are The Music In Me - Signed (http://s202.photobucket.com/player.swf?refURL=/&file=http://vid202.photobucket.com/albums/aa303/purplewowies/YouAreTheMusicInMe-1.flv&fs=1&os=1&ap=1)



GREAT JOB on your video! **I think for the word to I would use TO which is touching your two pointer fingers together like one is going to the other one. I don't know much about glossing either, but it looked pretty good to me. And I could understand your signing in the video, so AWESOME! Keep practicing :)